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LesserLoops's Lesser Artworks

Post by LesserLoops on Thu Jun 21, 2012 3:40 pm

Alright, I am not a very good artist, I am going to throw that out there first. But, I ask you, please take the time to look at my humble "Artworks" and tell me what is good, and what could be better. I shall get around to posting a few of my sketches shortly.

Note: When I say sketch, it will most likely be on a sheet of notebook paper. Then, if I like what I see and get positive feedback from the community, I will put it on legit paper and call it done.
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Post by LesserLoops on Thu Jun 21, 2012 4:30 pm



Ok, if this works, please give me feedback on what would make it better.
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Post by Moe Howahd on Fri Jun 22, 2012 1:45 am

It's pretty good now.

Something that could make it better would be if you put in more shadings and colors. Right now it looks kinda blended. That's all I can see.
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Post by LesserLoops on Fri Jun 22, 2012 10:24 am

Ah. Thanks. I'm still getting the hang of shading.
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Re: LesserLoops's Lesser Artworks

Post by Dalu50 on Thu Jun 28, 2012 11:27 am

Hey, I like the sketch! It's quite sketchy, which really makes sketches exceptional. Very Happy I agree with Moe about adding more shading, though.
Probably making the hills in the foreground darker would do the trick. Anyway, I love mountain and hill drawings! Keep it up, chap! Very Happy

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